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  • Art & Photography Re: Cats [[Grey Set 1]]

    Aww, so cute! Gosh, how many cats do you have? xD 1) A bit blurred. It kind of hurts my eyes to look at it, 'cause of the bluriness. 2) ...

    Mar 21, 2009
  • General Articles Re: Idealism of An Aesthetic Youth

    Hi there! Grammar first, alright? You made several mistakes: The time came where This should be when, since you're talking about a specific point in time, as opposed to a ...

    Mar 21, 2009
  • Art & Photography Re: Can YWS use this?

    Ooh, pretty! I like how it's all distorted-ish. However, I'm not a big fan of all the black around it. It looks like there's some weird demonic thing eating the ...

    Mar 21, 2009
  • Art & Photography Re: Random Snapshots

    Hi! These were really cool. I liked them. Except! The first one kind of looks like the top of a really really old person's bald, liver-spotted head. I know, it's ...

    Mar 20, 2009
  • Writing Activities Re: Title Feedback

    Hah! Way off, Krupp! Anywayz, yours makes me thing of a boardwalk at the beach on a sunny day in summer. And, because I'm my fantastic self, I think that ...

    Mar 20, 2009
  • Writing Activities Re: Title Feedback

    I think of a book about this really rich, snobby girl. I'm sorry, but that does not appeal to me. The Edge of the World

    Mar 20, 2009
  • General Articles Re: I'll Always Be Weak

    Hi there! Okay; I loved this. I've totally felt this way before. *Sigh* Just some nitpicks: Your charm and jokes hook every girl in the room, hook, line, and sinker. ...

    Mar 20, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Who?

    Hi there! First off, the whole comma-pause thing just doesn't work. If the commas are in unecessary places, our minds will just skip over them. The "intended purpose" is in ...

    Mar 18, 2009
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Jamais Quitter [2]

    Bonjour, Suzanne! Ca va? She didn’t sleep last night. If they kept her another night, she probably wouldn’t sleep tonight either. You repeat night a lot here. Also, when you ...

    Mar 17, 2009
  • Art & Photography Re: Creeping Tower

    Ooh, pretty! A bit big, and blurred as well, though. I like the effect that the black and white gives it; sort of like this eerie feeling. I've got the ...

    Mar 16, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: Is this not love?

    Hey there! First off, welcome to YWS. Comments are in bold, 'kay? Love is the spring that never runs dry, I think it'd have more of an effect if Love ...

    Mar 16, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: Girl From Twilight?

    TL G-Wooster: Kristen Stewart was in Speak? I've read the book, and I've totally wanted to see the movie for forever now. Is it as good as the book is?

    Mar 16, 2009
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Jamais Quitter [1]

    Bonjour, Suzanne! Je suis en d'accord avec Angel of Death. J'adore ce aussi. Francais est tres belle, plus belle que anglais! :wink: All language comments aside, I did enjoy this. ...

    Mar 16, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: Girl From Twilight?

    Pfft. All those Twilight actors/actresses looked stoned. I think that's just "haut couture" for them these days. Personally, Twilight - both the movie and the book - is way too ...

    Mar 16, 2009
  • Media Reviews Re: Great American Novels

    To Kill a Mockingbird, by Harper Lee. One of the best books I've ever read, and it really focuses in on the racial issues in America during the early 1900s. ...

    Mar 14, 2009


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