Explosive_Pen

Alright. I reviewed all of you guys (obviously). :D

Hi there. Here as requested. :D My skin is dry. I feel it hang off the bones, shedding off my fragile features. I can't breathe. My windpipe... oh, my breath ...

Hi there. Finished reading. :D I noticed some grammar mistakes and pointed them out, but my computer went wacky and I don't particularly want to go back and search for ...

Hey Suzanne. Dumas was better than friends, anyway. I'll bet! I've never read his work, but he's on my super-long list. Right after Dante's Divine Comedy. :D “I'll do it ...

Eek! It's long! xD Ah, well. Length is no matter. Clara smiled, and then pulled the girl up, "Now go take a shower." That second comma should be a period, ...

Kite

Hi Evi. Can I bug you for a review? I'll give you a cookie.

So sorry I embarrassed you And maybe ruined your life. But it can’t even begin to compare To how much you’ve ruined me. A wave of the hand, A smile ...

Yay! Finally, chapter 3! I feel like it's been years. xD She had signed her released papers, talked to the doctors; the whole shebang. That semicolon should be a comma, ...

Here as requested! I always get so intimidated by your poetry. You have this sort of indecipherable, old-time quality ion your writing. I'll break it up. I'll do a line-by-line ...

Hi! Here as requested. I know you asked me to do an overview, but some things were bugging me, so I'll just get those out of the way first, 'kay? ...

I'll do a line-by-line, an overview, or both. Just specify. I'll review both poetry and prose, but if it's ridiculously long, don't expect a review anytime soon, especially not if ...

Hi there! Yes, now that you mention it, I could go for some string cheese myself. :D You know what I want? I want some string cheese! I'm awfully hungry; ...

Oh my God! Haha! Welcome to YWS, and may I just say, you've come up with a killer! I mean, "I have been hard for 90 years." Talk about.... well, ...

Actually, it's been done where the main character isn't the narrator. Just consider Sherlock Holmes, as an example.