Explosive_Pen

June, for being a reviewing machine and a good friend. Rosey, for being superbly nice and welcoming me into YWS with open arms. Flute (aka, Twin), for being my best ...

Oh, she's so pretty! Hair: Wonderful details and shading. Very realistic. Oh, and I love her bangs! Eyes: Nice! I like how you drew the little brow-bridge on top and ...

Twin, dear, I know this is horridly overdue, but hopefully you'll remember these tips for future reference. Grammar was amazing, and no spelling flukes. Flow: I do feel that you ...

Anti-pop! Hi! I am so sorry it took me this long to finish my review. But school got the better of me, y'know? So I'm back now, ready to review. ...

Hi there anti-pop. I only have half an hour to review this, so if I don't finish now, I'll come back later, alright? I promise! She knew that voice – ...

June! What are you talking about? You have beautiful handwriting. And thank you so much for including me. I feel special now. :D

June! Thank you ever so much for providing a distraction from my AP homework! :D 1. Aww, so cute! A little blurry though, but I guess that's because of the ...

Alright, see, I'm all for tolerance. I'm a Catholic, but my best friends are Hindu, atheist, and Protestant. I don't really care if you insult my religion, but I'll say ...

Aww, am I out of business already? :(

Yes, crossing genres is common. Don't post it twice; that just makes people think it's something different and essentially annoys them. If you're not sure what your genre is, post ...

Oh, this is so sweet! An amazing read. I had to reread it a few times to really catch the meaning (but that's good; means I actually enjoyed it enough ...

Hi there! Welcome to YWS. :wink: The Eyes of Night The patter of the mitten feet, Maybe mittened feet? I don't think mitten works with feet, though. Swerving ‘cross the ...

Here it is, Twin: Review any time you'd like. And wow, it looks like you're getting a lot of business here, Twin. I'm jealous! My "Will Review For Food" thread ...

Okay! Thank you guys so much for the helpful reviews. It seems there's been some confusion about the bird of paradise thing, though? A bird of paradise is, actually, a ...

A/N: This originally had a prologue, but after much thought, I decided to take that out. If you guys think it should have a prologue, I'd be happy to post ...