Explosive_Pen

I better not get mentioned on this thread.... >.>

xD Shina, thanks for the awesome review. They're not lovers. :P This poem was about my mom and I, so it should be read differently than a romantic-poem-is-romantic poem. xD ...

Floating through the cosmos Like paper dolls with wings. Our hands are intertwined, But we slowly slip away. The space between our closed palms Like the space between our hearts; ...

A/N ~ Sorry for the French at the end, but it was written for my French teacher. "Les papillons d'or" means "golden butterflies." Memories float in the air, Like butterflies ...

Rawr, dear, please don't talk back to the reviewers. They are honestly trying to help, and if they spend hours trying to better you as a writer, you should thank ...

Juneh! 1. It's sorta smallish and blurry? The visible side of the heart is too pointy. 2. Eesh, the background makes my eyes hurt. Her nose freaks me out, and ...

Hi! Here as requested. :) The scent of fire, I thought, as I hunched over the carcass of a deer. Thoughts should be in italics, and no comma after thought. ...

Hey! I went to the beach with my mom the other day and I took a lot of pictures. Sixty-four, to be exact. Here are some of the best ones. ...

Here again! :D A stream of crimson surged down the coward's face, forming a pool of the substance below his chin. Ah, you have potential for a hook here, darling, ...

Hi! Here as requested! First of all, your title is win. :D Hidden behind thousands of dancing clouds was the faint glimmer of orange. The faint glimmer of tomorrow. I ...

tnme ~ Yes, I'll review lyrics, but it might not be too good of a review. xD Give me the link and I'll see what I can do. :D

Here as requested! Gah... *Gets off her lazy butt, groans, and proceeds to review.* I tried to keep my pace, suppressing the want of running towards him. I don't know ...

Poppity! Can it be? Have you brought me out of my reviewing rut? Yes. Thanks for the title making me laugh and for making me stop being lazy. =] Anyway, ...

Hi there! Tell me u didnt feel my feet touching yours in the hot summery air by the pool, and in our room Or my hands feeling your butt, and ...

Emily!!! *Tears piece apart* xD Love is something that has changed drastically within the past few years. Since you talk about the sixties in the next paragraph, change years to ...