Explosive_Pen

Peanut! I'm not an artist by any means, but I'll try to help. The hand looked a childish (not childishly drawn; just as if it were the hand of a ...

A/N: This was origanally freeform... I'm not sure how I feel about the line breaks, so please let me know if they work or not. Thanks =] I’ve been to ...

Hi there! I have to admit, I always get a bit excited when I look at the frontpage of YWS and see a new poem from you, and this certainly ...

Lileh! Of course I always love your work, obviously. ;) I liked this. It was so sweet and surprisingly apt with what I'm feeling at the moment. This flowed nicely ...

Hello. I liked this. I think you've got some great images. There's a place under my eyelids where strangers like to drive their cars. While this presented an interesting image, ...

Hi there! I love Snow Patrol. =] I'm sorry, but while this is still a good poem, it's not the best that I've seen from you. I love your work ...

Hello! I love photography and evidently you have a talent for it. Of course, there's always room for improvement, so I do have a few things to say. 1) This ...

This is beautiful, but then again, I've always enjoyed your work. Because of that, I've always been too intimidated to offer a proper critique, but I'll do my best. A ...

We sit on a blanket counting the stars: One for you and me and all the lovers That ever knit themselves into this earth. I examine the fraying patchwork of ...

Hey! I've never heard of that song before. As for your poem though, I enjoyed it. I liked the emotion and especially your word choice, like the bit about the ...

Hey there! Here as requested, sorry it's taken me so long. I'm thoroughly out of practice in both writing and reviewing poetry, so forgive me if I'm not very helpful. ...

I can’t stop running but I don’t quite know what I want to leave behind or what I’d like to find. And I can’t seem to figure out just where ...

Oh my God, haha. I don't feel that I can give this a legitimate review, as I enjoyed it far to too much. It made me laugh, it had great ...

Hiya, Hope! Could you please review my poem for me? Thanks so much in advance =]

Lily! Could I bug you for a review on this? Thanks so much if you get around to it