Explosive_Pen

First of all, please use proper grammar. Everyone who passed second grade is required to punctuate properly. It's common courtesy, especially when posting it on a site filled with people ...

Ooh, very pretty. ^^ It looks kind of anime-ish, if you know what I mean? Like, it looks like a pokemon. I agree with Ryp (Gryphon Fledgling) that the eye ...

I would curl up in a fetal position and bawl my eyes out. I love YWS. I love the people, I love the writing, and I'm even learning to love ...

Ooh. Very pretty. ^^ 1) I like the angle. You could, however, have moved the scraper to the left a little. Rule of thirds and all that. The rule of ...

A/N: This is the first poem I've written in over a month, so I'm sorry it's rather, um, odd? Inspired greatly by the cute guy at Starbucks. :D Hello, I’d ...

Hi there! I haven't seen you around before, so welcome to YWS. First of all, don't use unnecessary ellipses. (I think that's what they're called? If not, it's these: ... ...

Hi Rosey! I agree with Evi about the beginning. It seems to be a little forced and tell-y. It had started innocently enough. The abruptness of this sentence suggests foreshadowing. ...

Hi Angel. ^^ First of all, U is a letter. You is a word. They are not to be exchanged. To me, one of the rudest things in the world ...

xD Shina, this is amazing. I officially love you. Sure, the rhythm might have been off in some places, and yeah there were a few unintentional rhymes that threw me ...

Aww, so cute! :P

They're actually not black and white... The color option is called cyanotype - it's more blue-ish. I think they're cool. :D Also, I took these right after it rained. 1) ...

Hi again! Another pet-peeve of mine is dredging up old pieces, but since you asked so nicely, and I did promise you three reviews, I'll make an acception. :D The ...

Eeep, there's more! I haven't read this part yet, so yay! You are automatically awesome for posting a second part. That whole first part about the numbers.... Huh? Where is ...

Hi tnme! Here as requested! Sorry it took me so long, but I've been really busy for the past few weeks. I've actually read this before, but couldn't find anything ...

Kat, I don't think that was me. I joined after that date. *Nods* So I am as of yet unmatched. :D