Explosive_Pen

Hi Sureal! This was a good read. A little, erm, vivid , but entertaining. Captain Classy and June already pointed out the things that I was going to. I thought ...

No. Because if it was a lie, it would grow, so he doesn't know for sure that it would grow, so then it would grow. But since his nose has ...

First post zomg! Hehe, I found YWS in a copy of Writer's Yearbook. (I smell irony!) Once upon a time, Pen was a talentless poetry noob. Now Pen has finished ...

They live in a tiny world  Of empty space and gravity,  Of zip-zip motion and crazy eights.  They come in huge numbers  That we have no names for,  And they ...

Hi there! Here as requested. that ...other I don't quite like the repetition of "each other," especially since in the next line you say "one another." Find another way to ...

Hi there! Pretty pictures. 1) This is okay. I like that the grass is the focus here, rather than the building. I'd move the building either to the left or ...

Evi Jeebs! I'd like a review on my poem please?

Hi there Kylan! I don't think I've ever reviewed something of yours before (totally wasn't intimidated or anything silly like that...). I think you should capitalize your sentences. That's a ...

Awww so cute! This is one of those adorable spontaneous photos that I just love. It's brilliant. It's really blurry, but as Nutmeg said, I'm guessing you used a camera ...

Salty seas and golden days, Drifting in an ocean filled With drops of melted sunshine. Carved by waves of manic Delight, bleached by seconds of Stillness. Until I am stripped ...

You live in a pretty place. ^^ 1. I find this a tad cliche. Like in every movie, when the main character goes to California, they always have to show ...

These are amazing. ^^ I like the angle in the first one better. I don't like how in both of them, you can see the fingers on the other hand. ...

June made me post pictures again. xD Since I'm feeling artsy, I suppose I'll title them. :P 1) Black-eyed Bliss 2) Shielded 3) River Reflections 4) New York City Sunsets ...

Hey Shauni! Long time no see. ;) So! This photo is beautiful. It's so adorable. I agree with Via - her eyes are fantastic and definitely deserve to be brighter. ...

Hi there! Sorry this took so long. I haven't reviewed prose in a long time, and I haven't read the first part, but I'll do my best with what I ...