Explosive_Pen

Kamas!

Hey there! So when I saw that you're only twelve years old, I was really impressed. This is a really good poem to be writing at that age, but you ...

Hi there, Ed. I haven't seen you in a while. I liked this. It's always refreshing to see simplicity in poetry, while most poets use long words and complicated sentences. ...

He and I share everything from glass jars filled with hopes written on torn paper edges to the last slice of pizza on rainy Friday nights. We even share our ...

Hi there. So unlike most of your other reviewers so far, I don't think I've ever read any of your poetry. I'm regretting that now; I thought that this was ...

Hi there. So I like concept of this, and your images are fantastic. However, I felt that the poem read like a long, run-on sentence. But that's easy to fix. ...

Mars! Long time no see! So I really like this. Like really, really. This poem is so eloquent and it flows nicely and the imagerly is excellent and your diction ...

Thank you both for your feedback. Ancientforever, yes that was meant to say "would be" and there was supposed to be a comma after "home." Thank you for catching those ...

I watched your face light up like New York City when I came home from wherever I used to be. I used to be mine, all mine, until you stole ...

Hi there. So the concept of this was good, but the execution was a bit lacking. First of all, please add in some punctuation. Without it, this seems a bit ...

eeeeexplosive-pen xD Not too bad. Couldn't do the underscore though because clicking shift and the dashy at the same time with one elbow is not gonna happen. And I dunno ...

This is so raw and scatter-brained and in serious need of help. Something this personal isn't something I'd normally post, so I apologize if it seems odd. That said, I ...

The color is nice, but it's a bit bright and overexposed. Also, while the trunk is sharp, all those leaves in the foreground are really blurry. I think it would ...

Hi there! I haven't reviewed prose in so long, so forgive me if I seem a bit scatterbrained. Also, I haven't read the reviews before mine, so forgive me if ...

Thank you so much everyone for the reviews. =]