ExOmelas

Hi, welcome to the site! Just so you know, this is a lot better than my first review was XP Anyway, "fuelling" is the British spelling, but I've come across ...

In recent times, setting and I have not been getting along. I struggle to know when the best time to add in details is. Do you see any moments where ...

Thanks!

Hrm...I don't really have any plans to take it to a lab. And they're only at the hospital because the vet's is full. I was hoping Miles made it seem ...

The only thing I want to reply to here is the hospitalisation thing. It sort of ties in with the lab idea. They have to make sure that Miles - ...

Ok, thanks. I maybe should put something in from Julie though. Since the rest of it is from Miles' perspective, this would be the last chance to see inside the ...

When you say unfazed, do you mean that she seems calm? She is almost crying towards the end, but I do see what you mean about not really questioning. I'll ...

oooops I forgot XD

Changes made!

Well, nice to have a name for it, I suppose. If I get time I'll try and give this a proper review, feels like it would make sense for me ...

Thanks for the review! I was worried the cliffhanger was a bit heavy handed so good to know it came off ok. Those sound like reasonable changes. I'll look at ...

I used to pick at the skin around my fingernails. Is this what you mean? I stopped at New Years' and am lasting pretty well but I don't even remember ...

Yeah, sorry, I wasn't really finished with the chapter, but I couldn't find a way to split the next scene...I will work on that. Cheers for the review :D

Hey Night! You know, the ironic thing is, I'm working on a side project and I've been working on setting in it. I think I'm getting the hang of it ...

Wow, thanks for the awesome review! (this chapter was mine btw) I'll keep this in mind. If you read the next chapter, don't be alarmed by the sudden end. I ...