ExOmelas

Wow I totally forgot about this. Yeah I pretty much only did this as a fun thing for AdrianMoon. Thanks for the feedback though :)

hehehe my plan has worked 3:) 1. All will be revealed...eventually, and with plenty of foreshadowing... 2. In the letter that was sent to Miles (who is a he) it ...

Congrats on your star! When you say Miles is too awesome, do you mean he is a manic-pixie-dream-cat? I would be worried if he was that. I wouldn't want teenagers ...

No, it's ok, you're entitled to your opinion. What I took from that it is well written for the people who are likely to like it.

Sure, that works. I will work that in when it isn't 3.47 am :P

Sounds...I could do that, yep. Alright, I will get to it!

Oh, also, naming. I was thinking 'Old Lives' because there's going to be a lot about characters learning to leave behind lives they used to have or views they used ...

Thanks for the awesome review! I really am trying with the setting -- describing the kitchen, the sort of layout of the living room, the whiteness of the sky, the ...

Er...500 Miles was written and performed by the Proclaimers, from Edinburgh. It's like, Scotland's alternative national anthem XD Is fishy a cat pun...? Thanks for the review!! da-da da-da da-da ...

Thanks for the review! :D

A hot tub O.O wow. I don't know if you were intending for that to be apparent but if you were you might want to imply it more strongly somewhere. ...

My review appeared twice. I've edited the message to this and I'll notify a moderator tomorrow. You can do that between now and then if you'd rather.

Fantastic, exactly the reaction I was hoping for from the ending!

That sounds good. You are actually, I think, the first person who has read it since I made some changes so I was wondering if I could ask you about ...

Sure, but I went through it and found places to add details in. I'd still be interested to know your thoughts but just be aware there's no rush :)