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Hm... I'll have a look at what I can take out... or replace with description haha! xD Thanks for the review :D

Thanks for the review :) For what it's worth, "them" was the benches. As in, there were backs to the benches. Might be weird phrasing. Will edit this then finish ...

Oh, I could have something like "ever since I came out my mum's thought I've been in love with every man I've mentioned." Also I didn't want to provide too ...

So like I said on Ice Queen, I would find a chapter of tennis discussion interesting... I just find it hard to believe from experience that other people would xD

Haha, fair enough! Thanks for the review :D

Hehe xD

What I'll do is talk about how it's the men's singles final of an enormous tournament. Like, "Everywhere I looked people in the thousand strong crowd had their smartphones out ...

Ok, maybe that makes more sense. Will look into it :)

No problem :)

The latter of those sounds quite good. I'll try writing that out

Interesting... I'm not really sure how that works. Like, critiquable main characters are a thing, wonder why that doesn't work here. It's worth reading part 3 before I change things ...

Yeah, that's what I was thinking

Oh! Do you think "My Perfect Match" is too heavy-handed a title for a novel. I think it's fine for a not particularly serious short story, but a novel about ...

Cool! I'll definitely think about doing that xD ooh maybe for Camp NaNo!

Hm... I'll see what I can do. I do try and redeem him in the next chapters a bit. I could also try making him less cool in the first ...