ExOmelas

Okay, I decided not to let myself do nit-picks and nice moments this time because there was like one nit-pick and it was a typo so it was just going ...

Heyo, probably only going to get one of these done tonight but let's see what happens! Nit-picks and nice moments: “We’re posting the lot tomorrow,” she’d said, her face patchy ...

Okay, one review then I have to get back to studying. The girl froze. Surely someone had heard. This sounds a little bit like we're hearing the girl's thoughts. Also, ...

Okay, took my break, burnout is nowhere in sight. I think if this scene was less funny then it would be one maybe not worth spending that much time on. ...

I have a slight feeling of burnout itching me so this might be the last one before I take a rest for a little while. It's a testament to your ...

Ah, these reviews are just so much fun to write. Oh, Edna thought with a vague sense of surprise. She’d been subtly trying to set Benjamin up with her youngest ...

Lol, I guess "Meth" would be a pretty terrible nickname. AHHH THAT LAST LINE. I think until Theo being alright with Mittens added to his character the Mittens interactions were ...

Ah, only 5 reviews this time. Is this perhaps when people started dropping off and you started getting like a vaguely normal amount of reviews? xD Seriously, with how many ...

Hey, I made it! Nit-picks: He grabbed a fistful of her hair and pushed her down until she was mostly bent over, then leaned over her and ran through the ...

Well, barely anyone seems to be online (I said about an hour ago, before my dinner), might as well squirrel myself away reviewing. Teenagers are a more traditional choice, but—my ...

Okay, I think this will be the last one for tonight. Something cool I don't think this is a grammar nit-pick, but I don't think Edna would think the world ...

Just a friendly reminder that Harry dipped Hermione in hot sauce. Edna’s nephew had called to tell her he’d found a reasonably priced pocket dimension in which to store the ...

I think I'm just gonna chill here reviewing for a bit. “Of course,” Benjamin said, without so much as cringing the way so many of the orderlies—and even Marguerite’s family ...

Okey so I think nit-picks and nice moments can apply without caring about sentence structure or anything like that. Or maybe it'll stray a bit... We'll see xD Nit-picks and ...

Hey Omni, just some relaxing post-dissertation-reading reviewing for me :) Nit-pick: So, the sorcerer was le f t out of the loop on what exactly the Ancient One's plan entailed, ...