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Re: Vyheria - Chapter 6
Hey Shey, taken me a bit longer than usual this week but I'm here now. Nit-picks: That fist at Exliana’s side might have started swinging on its own, had it ...
Aug 21, 2018 -
Re: Homecoming 3.2
Hey, waiting on my oven to preheat so I figured I'd slip in a review. Nit-picks: “Hello,” Alison responded. She seemed to be in a good mood Which Rosalie can ...
Aug 18, 2018 -
Re: The Three Lockets [Chapter 3.3]
Hey Saen, let's get reviewing! Nit-picks and nice moments: but they couldn't have gotten that far from home – right? I mean, they could have, and I don't think Cass ...
Aug 16, 2018 -
Re: A Pocketful of Posies - Chapter 4.1
Hey, I was meant to be go out with a friend but he can't make it so I'm drowning my disappointment in productivity :P Nit-picks and nice moments: Hildegarde prickled ...
Aug 16, 2018 -
Re: Before the Dragon - Chapter 7 (LMS IV)
Okay, I'm just gonna sit back, relax and slowly work my way through this quite long chapter pffft burnout what is that i haven't even heard of that Nit-picks: She ...
Aug 15, 2018 -
Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 15.2
Okay, this is it. This review for my fourth blue star! Clem, however, leapt to her feet. There was fire in her eyes as she glared at the carpet-enchanter, but ...
Aug 14, 2018 -
Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 15.1
New goal! Turns out I'm only 2 reviews from my next star! So see you in a moment as well as this one xD The girl’s feet made little noise ...
Aug 13, 2018 -
Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 14.2
And this for my fiftieth review of the month! “You’re not allowed to enhance iPhones—” *purses lips* *shakes with giggles* *applause* woooooow What a little sleazebag, Edna thought. Academics
Aug 13, 2018 -
Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 14.1
Okay, I guess we're doing this. This to be number 64 on the leaderboards! And also to like help you with your project and stuff... I care about people improving ...
Aug 13, 2018 -
Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 13.2
Hi again, getting closer... A seatbelt was not going to save her from this crash, she thought vaguely. I don't think this thought was funny enough to merit pausing the ...
Aug 13, 2018 -
Re: In the Hands of Six 2.2
Yaaay you made it! Nit-picks: No, you will not start with that way of thinking, Wong thought. Your final hours will be filled with productivity, not intrusive thoughts that will ...
Aug 13, 2018 -
Re: Eos, Chapter 4: An Offer
Hey Mea, I think this'll be my last review of the day, and so far it's a good chapter to end on! Nit-picks: Isa inclined her head. “Then we will ...
Aug 13, 2018 -
Re: Before the Dragon - Chapter 6 (LMS IV)
Hey Shady, I am glad you made it even if you don't know how! Nit-picks: It was the only way to demand respect, as a woman – the only woman ...
Aug 12, 2018 -
Re: Homecoming 3.1
Hey Elinor! Good to see your story again :) Nit-picks: In the past, she’d additionally always worn her hair back in a ponytail. Is the "additionally" here like, this was ...
Aug 12, 2018 -
Re: Slate and Earth Chapter 5.2
Hey Lauren, this is the first of like 4 novels I was following that posted today. Hope people weren't too stressed xD Nit-picks: after arguing over whether tent camping was ...
Aug 12, 2018
