Evangelina

L3 of S1 is rather long and awkwardish. "Fangs come out to taste" is a bit wordy--"Fangs out to taste" might be better. The last line also doesn't rhyme very ...

Ahhh, don't I know the feeling... :( For the poem itself: It falls into a repeated pattern that grows monotonous around "creativity has deserted me". Try to jumble it up ...

tricked and fooled lies and more Try to make the beginning less "grocery list" sounding: instead of ...and...and... try something that flows more how could it be so? we were ...

Why is matter allowed to suddenly and randomly pop out of nothingness, but a living thing not allowed to come from anything other than another living thing? --referring to that ...

I agree. I think that even if the body is like a vegetable, but the mind still functions and communication is still eminent, it is wrong to "pull the plug". ...

You know, if anyone has books they think are worthy, feel free to share!

Did I mention I hated the public school system? I don't recall.. Well I've been in both private and public...

Wow, it reminds me of mt native Taiwan. Beautiful!

Water for Elephants :O

1. We reach for one another - a dog barks in the darkness outside, a beat drops from a passing car, a door down the hall slams shut. We are ...

BOOK OF THE WEEK Week 10/27-11/4 Book 3 Though he may not speak of them, the memories still dwell inside Jacob Jankowski's ninety-something-year-old mind. Memories of himself as a young ...

Catch-22, lmao.

Clau !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! -that is all-

(About the Thousand Splendid Suns) I know many people who liked it, but I personally thought that a subject so deep and sad should not have been discussed in such ...

Woo for Italo Calvino! If on a Winters night a traveler is an amazing book. I've recommended it to several people, though, and I think only a few of them ...