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Re: For Non-UK Members
What did the media do? What they always do. Stalked her. Well not exactly. But they made her want the driver to go faster. Some say the driver had a ...
Aug 8, 2007 -
Re: Hopelessly Un-In-Love
With a semi-automatic tucked behind a jean pocket a life of policed solitude and desperation framed by hopeless attempts at chocolate kisses ending with misery and thrown-away wrappers There is ...
Aug 8, 2007 -
Re: Of Alcoholics and Bittersweet Regret
Touch-- This, bliss of tactile trust; Ignorance in a dusty bottle labeled Kirin. Drink away your nothing, Become nothing. Better than foolish wisdom. Words are meaningless without power and those ...
Aug 8, 2007 -
Re: Adventures of the SPEW Gryphon(Pic Thread)
Cool Adam. Love the incorp of the book!
Aug 8, 2007 -
Re: Chemically-Unbalanced
Nice one. I love the word usage and phrasing. Only thing I would work on is punctuation. E.g. L4 of S1 should end in a period, methinks. -evangelina
Aug 8, 2007 -
Re: Chao Ab Ordo
The last line was very cliched. Because of course, things do get worse, don't they? And I don't think you should start it off as "he" did this and "he" ...
Aug 8, 2007 -
Re: For Non-UK Members
I love diana. She was just a beautiful person, inside and out. F***ng media :(
Aug 8, 2007 -
Re: Rounded With A Sleep Pt. 1
Whence, I'm guessing you're Ed. You already know how I feel about this, but I'll flatter your ego anyways...BRILLIANT!
Aug 8, 2007 -
Re: A2K
Well, the first line itself has a mistake, lol. I don't know what it is, exactly, but I didn't really enjoy this didn't drag me in. I'd work on the ...
Aug 8, 2007 -
Re: Honor #1
KYLAN! This is fan-freakin-tastic. I'm Chinese meself, and I enjoy the names, the district, your imagination, and the part of the Laozi and Cunfu mix-up. It's all very realistic. Good ...
Aug 7, 2007 -
Re: Yesh, I'm new!
It reminds me of Sauron. Which is freakin sweet! I'm Evangelina.
Aug 7, 2007 -
Re: hello
Never too old...I'm sure you have an inner child! My names Evangelina.
Aug 7, 2007 -
Re: All the Birds
Awww. I loved this. It was...weird...the girl was like retarded or something...but it was so good! I loved the last line! -evangelina
Aug 7, 2007 -
Re: and as the ceramics reflect in two meanings, I laugh along
Hmmm. Kudos for an awesome title. You have great imagery and good word choice. Sometimes the ideas don't make sense to me or they seem to be very vague. And ...
Aug 7, 2007 -
Re: The Smell...
Wow. This is the first time I've read this type of poetry! It's outstanding, althought a little confusing--Im used to the characters being fleshed out [although since it's a poem ...
Aug 7, 2007