Evangelina

Thanks for your advice!

For me...it's rather strange. As I'm typing away, I think "YES! I have a masterpeice!" but then I actually read it printed, and I'm like "Oh no..."

A mindless pollutant fills your brain as the matriarch mindlessly drones passing fugitive moments where you think “perhaps I have a chance” --but no. you have been gravely mistaken there ...

No prob. My life is boring usually too. Day-to-day I mean. I fill my life with studying, eating, writing, and occasionally going to a show with friends.

Ahh. Well, I don't know about the foundation...thanks for reading!

Thank you very much! Glad to know I did well. Haven't written this type of poetry in a while.

I love it! I see myself in here and the imagery and word usage is astounding. However, I don't see where its going. For the boy....what? Or is it more ...

I'm not creating a suspicion...CS Lewis said it himself.

I know. The whole point of fantasy is for it to be fantastic, out of bounds, different...

Aw thanks! Yea...if it was completely painless, I would totally get a couple...

disire = desire moarne = mourne You don't suck :] I just think it needs to be expanded. -huggles- -evangelina

Not a star to be seen. Only blackness to my eye. ^ this is rather sticcato in a way that doesn't work. It's also a bit boring, and doesn't flow. ...

Hehe. Thanks so much Adam! Glad I could make you laugh.

Haha. Poirot is so funny. With his french accent. The actors British, you know. It's all rather brilliant.

The Six Dumbest Brothers Based off the Chinese fairy tale Once upon a time in a far, far, far away land—there lived an emperor with a pearl. The land was ...