Evangelina

Yeah, I forgot to add the mature label too. Um, are you gonna read it?

Wow. This is great! I love the feeling, you have great word choice, "shamed is the sun" is awesome!

Chapter One “What the hell,” barked Perez, “I thought I said fast and clean, I thought I told you to make it a quickie? It was nice and easy, Bridget, ...

thanks to you all, and sorry for not responding back for a while. Isis, I love your new name

Hehe no I wasnt offended or anything :D

No it's supposed to be put together as "passing fugitive moments where you think 'perhaps I have a chance'" Thanks!

Random House will be hard...BEST OF LUCK!

Nice to meet you to. I'll...try to find where the info is...

Thanks all...three of you! I'll work on it. And yes, stupidlittleeric, I am not hate-filled it should be better.

Mint chocolate chip or pastachio. Lol. You?

Ha-ha, thanks Pie. Thanks for reminding me that there might still be hope for me :]

Well, 19 doesnt mean anything. I've read better stuff on here than in that book.

Very interesting. Good plot. I'd work on dialogue formatting, it's a little hard to read as it is. -evangelina

Henna is bad for you though. The plant has some kind of poison that seeps through your skin and enters your bloodstream.

Thanks eric...