Evangelina

This whatever time :S A seperate reality. Idyll is pronounced I-dell. Thanks for the best crit! I'll work on more!

Thanks for checking it out! I've decided to dump it...

Love this poem! Its a great childs rhyme!

I adore this book. And the author.

Im trying to sell a violin too, lol, so I dont think so.

Whoaaaa. You live in Arizona?????!!!! First person I've met on here that lives where I do.

Hello there! 'Tis Eva, the official stalker of woolly mamoths. Need anything, give me a hollar or summit. -Evang

"Sometimes the most simplest poems are the most beautiful, but never let your poem be common." ---Dead Poet's Society

Why is this HELLO? are you being ignored? awww. I'll check it out.

CAL! I love the entire idea behind it, and the description is lovely. It's great! I want to see more :D

I agree on the over simplistic. It's just touching the surface. Find some emotion and delve deeper, eh? :D

I would say, don't put something here that you really and truly expect will become published.

Thanks. I get the spanish thing alot. It's my mix of russian and asian. It's called Huinshiua. Ty!

Thanks Am! It's at the Grande Canyon, a few hours from where I live!

Bahaha. Nice one, Push.