Evangelina

basically a woman calls this person beautiful, and even though she's a low-life, its the fact that someone, anyone, finally said it...

Aww. I don't feel loved. :p

I'd remove any repeated words, it just isnt necessary. Overall, it was ok. A little vague, but with lots of hope and a good base.

Hehe, good job, Sur! I was iffy at first, but after I got into it, viola~ a masterpeice!

she calls me beautiful with quivering lips and trembling thighs; the lipsticks’ smeared on the pig; all dressed up in high heels with the smell of Vodka, --a lingering taste ...

Thanks Kyl! Hey guys, Im submitting this for a literary journal. Wish me luck!

Hello! Help, as you can see, is readily available.

hehe. maybe you'll be my professor.

SUPERNATURAL! I love it! Plus CSI and Law and Order

If you wait 2 and a half years, Ill be living in the UK...

Im a definite yes.

Im reading THE EMPEROR'S CHILDREN by Claire Messud.

Im almost 16...

I'm only a sophmore and I've known for awhile! OXFORD! WOOO!

Hahaha, Flem. Way to go.