Evangelina

I LOVED THIS BOOK TOO!

HI! I don't know much about playwrites and stuff, but it all sounds interesting!

Haha thanks. Actually I was looking a pic on Flickr for inspiration, and a weed/flower thing by the roadside popped up.

Thanks so much! Yea, looking back I noticed how many asides I used...it's frightening. I'll work on it...I always have the most trouble starting a novel.

chapter one: an outstanding delay Andrea Rudovik checked the clock for the fifty-seventh time. It told her—or at least, what she thought it told her--that midnight had come and gone, ...

It seems a little bit plain, to me. It has a saddness that should be brought to life even more. It's pretty good, but could be better with less cliche, ...

With faded glory, the wet cement lies, muddied and spewed with gutter waste; cracks like spidery webs lining the gray, and moss with soggy tendrils inching forward. The flower, an ...

Thanks Well!

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! how cute!

were doing dimensional analysis too, and Im pretty much as lost as you are.

Thanks Gin!

hahah. You had me worried there for a sec, auth.

bahah. Freakin' awesome cats!

Yea -headpats- we'll discuss the shotgun later, when the children get to bed.

bet you had to pay a hefty fine... :p