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Re: Outward Bound
Thanks fer the suggestions aye I have no say means in the world my words are worth nothing and I have no say in anything, a phrase Thanks again =)
Nov 10, 2011 -
Re: Outward Bound
I have this feeling The feeling so great To kill that crawling insect That one moving away Here in my prison cell Here in this cage I feel poison and ...
Nov 9, 2011 -
Re: Story told in Colors
I have a certain connection with the colours, or so I believe. I can see this whole story with a different perspective Firstly, hey there. I love the idea or ...
Nov 1, 2011 -
Re: Burning Thoughts
There is form, there is a structure, quite maintained. There is essence. Metaphors Keep writing. It will get better and better and better Don't let anyone define your boundaries! Love
Nov 1, 2011 -
Re: Arrival of monsoon
I am a bad reviewer. I don't like meddling with other person's stuff. I just like giving them thumbs up, unless they don't ask me, it feels as if I ...
Nov 1, 2011 -
Re: The Darkness
Hello. Well well well I myself tried the dark writing but then I scared myself off Firstly, It was excellent you did not end it on dream, that really pisses ...
Nov 1, 2011 -
Re: My Inbetween
Hey, a very beautiful piece And it would be even better if you, next time, form a structure. Like a fixed number of lines in a stanza. It is very ...
Nov 1, 2011 -
Re: I Sijo
That is the quality of Sijo, it must have a sing song quality. Every three lines make a separate Sijo, aye It is not that good, because the structure gets ...
Nov 1, 2011 -
Re: I Sijo
Started ages ago. Was difficult for me but alright, practice makes man perfect. These are a few of my early (and late) Sijo 1 I watch as the monster rises ...
Oct 31, 2011 -
Re: Yet each man kills the thing he loves..
Whiterose Thanks for stopping by. =) =) Phoenix Thanks friend, I am so hurt
Oct 30, 2011 -
Re: Yet each man kills the thing he loves..
Ok. Thank you very much, I was jerked quite a hundred times myself reading a review longer than my post itself Number one: I did say do not dissect my ...
Oct 30, 2011 -
Re: Yet each man kills the thing he loves..
Thanks but I'd rather continue with my own style, I do understand Simple English, Believe me =P I do not mean to sound harsh or rude I appreciate it all!!! ...
Oct 29, 2011 -
Re: A chaotic scene
I love stuff that is short and beautiful. It was a cool and well read. Although I stress on scene descriptions but whatever suits the writer matters most. Add some ...
Oct 29, 2011 -
Re: Yet each man kills the thing he loves..
Ok well Thanks for the review but I would answer stuff back =) Immature word was used on purpose. He was not a a painter he was just someone *immature* ...
Oct 29, 2011 -
Re: Yet each man kills the thing he loves..
Yet each man kills the thing he loves, By each let this be heard, Some do it with a bitter look, Some with a flattering word. The coward does it ...
Oct 29, 2011
