Ethan

Wow... that was really sad and depressing. I thought you captured the mood perfectly, with the lack of formal rhyme and colloquial every-day language made it real. And very personal. ...

I started to write this poem around 15 min ago. All reviews appreciated. The New Tree See in me the beauty of the new tree. The way, my sway, the ...

And sorry for the actual length of the poem. Thanks you everyone for taking the time to review it. :)

That poem felt really powerful. Although it lacked clarity or direction, the overall message at the end was instilling and interesting. I don't know what else to say. I enjoyed ...

The opening stanza was a bit unclear in the imagery or meaning it presented, but I enjoyed the assonance and the rhyming within the lines itself. The word "hooray" seems ...

I really liked it and the fact that you handled a difficult theme well. It would have been more in-depth or better paced if there was a definite meter throughout ...

Thanks everyone for the welcome. :) Thank you for all the advice and help also.

I liked. It was precise, simple and clear and the emphasis on similiar and related images (things not being put up, space being empty) was very effective. It seems the ...

Background information: This was written for school many months ago and my writing style has changed somewhat since then. Though, I have kept all original spelling and grammar. This is ...

My body jolts with the temperature of the water I shudder, then slide I open my eyes Green Blue Black Salt in my eyes, so I close them again I ...

I enjoyed the overall flow of the poem, and the imagery and themes were well integrated. In the color red there is passion, there is love. In red there is ...

Hey everyone, I'm Ethan. I'm really not sure what this site is all about yet, and I'm a bit disoriented - but it looks like a neat forum. A bit ...