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  • Science-Fiction Short Stories Re: The Chronograph

    They were dead. They were all dead. His hands shook, making the printout all but impossible to read. What had he done? What will he do? Conley walked back into ...

    Jul 3, 2009
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Exile - Chapter 1 - Part 1

    I agree with JazzberryJam in her points, but here are a few other things I found. 'Twas nightfall in the kingdom of Xarifaa where young elf Tristan was stealthily climbing ...

    Jul 3, 2009
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Timekeeper

    Seven minutes left now ; it was almost time. In most instances of numbers, unless it’s something like a year or 423,478, it should be spelled out. Since these are ...

    Jul 3, 2009
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: First Storm

    Chapter One Above the city of Arvila, a hawk cut across the open sky, wings molding the air into an invisible path. It glanced from side to side. The sweeping ...

    Jan 6, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Heya! ^.^

    That sounds like an awesome science club. I've only read a handful of science fiction, sadly. Most of them were distopian like 1984. But those Asimov ones sound really interesting. ...

    Jan 6, 2009
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Project Lazurus

    Squares of dusty light danced around the library. The air was thick with the smell of ancient paper. This might look better as one sentence. “Squares of dusty light danced ...

    Jan 5, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Heya! ^.^

    Other hobbies... Hmm... Well, I love playing tennis. It's the only sport I'm decent at since I normally fail at group activities. It's simple. Just hit the ball back. Don't ...

    Jan 5, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: Any Contemporary Christian Music Fans out there?

    I love Switchfoot, and I really hope their new album will come out soon. Should be around spring. This is Your Life is still one of my favorite songs. Relient ...

    Jan 4, 2009
  • Media Reviews Re: Deltora Series

    I used to love the series when I was about 12 or 13, and I think it introduced me to the epic fantasy genre (though I'm not too sure Deltora ...

    Jan 4, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Heya! ^.^

    Hah! I'm surprised to see so many people into anthropology and stuff, though I guess I shouldn't be considering how much you need to know about different stuff to write. ...

    Jan 4, 2009
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Haven

    This was pretty interesting so far. The whole “people getting sucked into games” plot has been around for a while, but I’d like to see where this one goes. Aside ...

    Jan 4, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Heya! ^.^

    Thanks for the welcomes, guys. ^.^ Well, to answer a few questions, I'm interested in pretty much every European culture plus the Egyptians and Mayans, which will probably cause some ...

    Jan 4, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Heya! ^.^

    Hello! I’ve been lurking around this site off and on for some time now, and I figured it was about time I joined. I’m seventeen years old, and my favorite ...

    Jan 3, 2009


A person is more than their experiences, stacked up like stones... Our best moments are the foundations we use to reach for the sky.
— Yumi and the Nightmare Painter by Brandon Sanderson