EtCetera

Don't worry, Adox, you're not the first to not understand me. The poem is about me, the speaker, so that is why I used my instead of its. For the ...

I think you have deftly captured how easily it is that people fall for someone else... A minor annoyance at times, a devastating unwanted truth others. Very good word selection, ...

Verse I: This road has to end somewhere Beneath these faded stars. Even crystal roses Must always come to pass. Verse II: This road takes me through valleys As dark ...

I have nothing to say. This is so good! This is also the first time I've commented on anything besides poetry... All your imagery is excellent, the theme is really ...

My goodness... I am impressed. You're length doesn't match my Assassin, but it is still very engaging for how long it is. I really only skimmed it, but I am ...

Pretty well written. I really like the imagery and the super-dark feel of the poem. Since it's so short, maybe consider expounding on the dark something that is lurking in ...

Wow. That is intense. The imagery...wow. Very heartfelt, even if I'm not sure what exactly it means. Well written.

Can I say creepy much? Very well written, indeed. You have a nice nonchalant feel to it, especially for such a grim idea.

My hand reflects my work Callused fingertips Ink-stains rampant. My work reflects my soul Raging emotions Tumultuous feeling. My soul reflects my God Infinitely wise Author of inspiration. My God ...

This was all very good. You picked a very real feeling and I have to guess you probably witnessed it first-hand. I could see everything you said in this poem, ...

I like it! I was thrown off of what I thought I'd be reading by the title, though... I would highly recommend something like "Song of the Night" or something ...

Wow. Thank you for this monument to imperfection and I definitely wish I could write something like this! Your statements are very strong and your word selection is excellent. Very ...

I'm thinking "Devastation" or "End of the Beginning"... Otherwise, good job. But people, poetry does not need punctuation!!! Especially abstract poetry!

Last stanza could run like so: "Only you can do these things Only you can rescue me. Only ever you." Just an idea.

After the setting of the sun In this medieval city, A man ghosts from the shade His soul devoid of all pity. His garb was dyed a dusky gray For ...