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Winging its lonely way Onward toward the horizon. Never a permanent denizen, But ever soaring away. The sea reaches to crush This endless albatrossian flightpath, But the bird eludes it's ...

This poem is well-thought, but it does need a little work. The third stanza is the one that bothered me the most, especially in it's meaning. "I am powerful, but ...

To say I liked this poem would be a lie. To say I loved this poem would not. This was a brutal poem in the sense that people can be ...

I really think the theme of this was very good, especially since some people actually do go after this. It's a very human poem, so well done. I guess I ...

I must say that this was elegantly and [seemingly] effortlessly written. For some reason, I have the feeling that this was one of those poems that the pen mostly did ...

Soldier of shadows I run in the thick darkness Saving the lost light.

I personally think the colors and everything are good, but I think it needs some work. All the boats in the background add interest, but they draw too much away ...

It is very interesting, but the rhythm needs some work and the patterns need a little, too. The third stanza doesn't fit because of the repitition of the last two ...

You seem to have an obsession with war, my friend. Not that I can't say your good at writing poetry about it. I did love how brutal the words made ...

This blade in my hand Heartless, ruthless, merciless Does what I can't do

I really enjoy the acrostics, especially since you reached for the Latin, which I've only done once. The language you use is very strong, so I'm impressed. Overall, I usually ...

The burning anger, The raging sea. Rage leaves no room For subtle emotion Or sound reason. It destroys the wielder And uses them. It doesn't care For it can only ...

Aspects of life Can be simple, Defined. The fight is simple, Beat your opponent Or be beaten. Joy is simple, Impossible to define Yet simple. Rage is simple, A burning, ...

This was really good, I must say. The theme was interesting and I absolutely loved the last two lines, even though part of me feels the second to last could ...

Etonnant, you are well writ. I really like stanzas in sets of three. I tried that once and didn't like it very much. I also liked the pattern of "[insert ...