EscapeThat

This is well written and certainly gets the point across. In terms of being realistic, I'm gay and to me it's just a word, especially if theres no malice behind ...

Interesting piece, I enjoy the vicious battle between the two with the person stuck in the middle. I do feel like it gets a little repetetive at times though, I ...

This was recommended so I checked it out. I guess the main hole is that phones/internet don't work in Hogwarts though I understand its supposed to be comidic. While I ...

I like that its open to interpretation. It may well be about love/heartbreak and thats fine but it doesn't interest me, I hear so much about it all around it ...

I was a little lost wih this one,I'm not sure the reason for their parting is 100% clear, maybe you intended for it to be that way. It's well presented, ...

A little dramatic at times but very insightful. When I first started I was like "Nooo" but then once I realised where it was going and the self awareness of ...

It's not the most original of tales, I feel like I've heard this idea a few times before. I don't really consider the idea that women dressing down in order ...

A rare species of African ungulate.

I think the tone of this story could be made a little clearer. I couldn't decide whether you meant it to be funny, ironic etc. There are a few spelling ...

I like this piece, its very intriguing, keeps the interest going and I can tell it has a lot more life in it. The opening is very smart and the ...

It's humbling to know that my story inspired you to call your relative. Thank you for the great feedback.

Well I think us ancients still have something worthwhile to offer (-; To be completely honest with you, the area I live in London isn't terribly pleasant and certainly not ...

Haha its certainly worth a pilgrimage if you ever get the chance. Thank you, let me know what you think, I always value a fresh opinion. You certainly have an ...

Hahah how you indulge me. I have dabbled with it for years. then at about 18 wrote a truly hoffic story short for a contest, needless to say I lost. ...

This is my kind of writing. I would change nothing of the story, its brutal, its hearfelt and its raw. Finally having enough of being trodden on, snapping and hitting ...