Erynn

Hello :D I think what you've written is very interesting and could be a great story. The problem was the lack of descripton. I'm sure a lot of people watch ...

Hello there. I know there's already alot of reviews here, but I thought I might as well give my opinion. There is alot of stuff going on here. The abuse, ...

Hi there! There's one thing that caught my attention. It seemed a little odd that a nine year old was so familar with suicide. She seemed a bit more mature, ...

"Your name?" She stood frozen. The bright lights glared down on her with the strength of a hundred suns. Little beads of sweat were forming on her forhead. She tried ...

Eva would be embarrased and run and hide...then try and put it out. What would you do if you saw a man hitting a doggy?

I know this is really short. But it's one of my journal entries I like reading over and over again, so I wanted to know what others think about it. ...

I stare at the mirror, an ugly face glares back. Her eyes are red from crying, her tears leaving streaks down her cheeks. Her arms are crossed over her chest ...

Honestly, the plot was really boring. The characters were flat. You should show the reader things like: Why won't Kesha go all the way? Or how does Kesha's rejection effect ...

I wrote this in the middle of the night so it probably sucks. But any reviews would be appreciated. Be honest!

No more crying myself to sleep at night. No more hiding in the bathroom at school. No more being afraid of mirros because they show the real me. No more ...