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Re: をすべて満たすためにニース ;3
Hey! Welcome to YWS! I'm Error404, nice to meet you. It's good to see some new faces. :D By the way, what does the title say? I'm learning Japanese at ...
Jan 7, 2011 -
Re: The blood-stained floors
Hey there, Redleaf! Error404 here to review your work. :) Haha, brace yourself for Grammar Nazi assault! Nah, I have nothing evil to say... today. ;) Might I say that ...
Dec 17, 2010 -
Re: Things I Hate
Ah, I love sweet and simple poems like these. They're really cute and always fun to read... definitely my kind of poem! :D On the other hand, this has a ...
Dec 17, 2010 -
Re: Extraterrestrial
Wow! That's a pretty neat story, I really liked the theme. Good work and keep writing, ~ Error404
Dec 17, 2010 -
Re: Seven Reasons Why Men are Better than Women
Well, you must realise that you took a very big risk then. Articles like these can be very easily misinterpreted and I'm sure you're aware of that now. I mean, ...
Dec 17, 2010 -
Re: Seven Reasons Why Men are Better than Women
Oh, how the times are changing, my friend. What game you must have to post this on a female dominant site. Let's skip this part and get to the reviewing, ...
Dec 17, 2010 -
Re: White Ravens
Hey GoaGreena, Error404 here! :D Oh, I quite liked it... loved it, actually! It was written beautifully from start to finish and I can't think of anything more to add ...
Dec 16, 2010 -
Re: Warmed Over
I appluad you, kind sir!!!
Dec 15, 2010 -
Re: Nightmares.
Hey Lunasol21, Error404 here! :D I loved the language and tone used in this poem. When I first starting reading I felt a sense of calmness and then WHAM! It's ...
Dec 14, 2010 -
Re: My Guardian Angel
Hey there! I agree with PinkViper , it is beautifully written. Welldone, I hope you got an "A" for that assignment! :D - Error404
Dec 14, 2010 -
Re: uuhhhh
Wow! I really liked it, my eyes didn't move off the text once! I was really gripped and wanted to hear more but alas, it ended too suddenly! I guess ...
Dec 13, 2010 -
Re: The Unseen [Chp. 1] revised!
Hey there! I'm fairly new here so please bear with me and this will be the first time I’ve review a short story. Also, please take note that everything I ...
Dec 13, 2010 -
Re: Welcome New Members! [2]
Hello everyone, I'm Error404! (Such an original name, I know.) :smt002 I joined today... well, a few minutes ago to be exact. I'm a little nervous to post my own ...
Dec 13, 2010
