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  • Welcome Mat Re: をすべて満たすためにニース ;3

    Hey! Welcome to YWS! I'm Error404, nice to meet you. It's good to see some new faces. :D By the way, what does the title say? I'm learning Japanese at ...

    Jan 7, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The blood-stained floors

    Hey there, Redleaf! Error404 here to review your work. :) Haha, brace yourself for Grammar Nazi assault! Nah, I have nothing evil to say... today. ;) Might I say that ...

    Dec 17, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Things I Hate

    Ah, I love sweet and simple poems like these. They're really cute and always fun to read... definitely my kind of poem! :D On the other hand, this has a ...

    Dec 17, 2010
  • Science-Fiction Short Stories Re: Extraterrestrial

    Wow! That's a pretty neat story, I really liked the theme. Good work and keep writing, ~ Error404

    Dec 17, 2010
  • General Articles Re: Seven Reasons Why Men are Better than Women

    Well, you must realise that you took a very big risk then. Articles like these can be very easily misinterpreted and I'm sure you're aware of that now. I mean, ...

    Dec 17, 2010
  • General Articles Re: Seven Reasons Why Men are Better than Women

    Oh, how the times are changing, my friend. What game you must have to post this on a female dominant site. Let's skip this part and get to the reviewing, ...

    Dec 17, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: White Ravens

    Hey GoaGreena, Error404 here! :D Oh, I quite liked it... loved it, actually! It was written beautifully from start to finish and I can't think of anything more to add ...

    Dec 16, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Warmed Over

    I appluad you, kind sir!!!

    Dec 15, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Nightmares.

    Hey Lunasol21, Error404 here! :D I loved the language and tone used in this poem. When I first starting reading I felt a sense of calmness and then WHAM! It's ...

    Dec 14, 2010
  • General Articles Re: My Guardian Angel

    Hey there! I agree with PinkViper , it is beautifully written. Welldone, I hope you got an "A" for that assignment! :D - Error404

    Dec 14, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: uuhhhh

    Wow! I really liked it, my eyes didn't move off the text once! I was really gripped and wanted to hear more but alas, it ended too suddenly! I guess ...

    Dec 13, 2010
  • Science-Fiction Novels Re: The Unseen [Chp. 1] revised!

    Hey there! I'm fairly new here so please bear with me and this will be the first time I’ve review a short story. Also, please take note that everything I ...

    Dec 13, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: Welcome New Members! [2]

    Hello everyone, I'm Error404! (Such an original name, I know.) :smt002 I joined today... well, a few minutes ago to be exact. I'm a little nervous to post my own ...

    Dec 13, 2010


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