Ermixon

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“Okay. Stay calm. I love you.” Because the voice isn't the one that's wounded, i see no reason for his speach to be fragmented this way. Consider changing, to one ...

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“Okay. Stay calm. I love you.” Because the voice isn't the one that's wounded, i see no reason for his speach to be fragmented this way. Consider changing, to one ...

He gave the orders of the President to the gate keeper, and turned around to face the men and women who, everyone present knew, might never have seen their homes ...

I'm starting with the second chapter because i already got help with the first on another website. Anyway the forward should clue you in on whats happening this chapter. Please ...

His lower half was like one of the King’s stallions, jet black and well muscled. His upper half was like a man’s, yet with a mane down his back and ...

“But eventually one thing did succeed in taming the chaos of our society, Pam. And that prophetic thing was Softball!” Yobah cheerfully stood up from his seat. “Well that about ...

I Write science fiction/fantasy mostly but i've been known to write things without a genre at times. My favorite writer is Richard A Knaak, author of my favorite book The ...

Greetings all i'm ER Mixon, i am rather new. I'm a writer from Albuquerque NM, not published. Just introducing myself.