Erica

Wow. That was honestly the most beautiful poem I've read so far. It's everything I belive in put into one short and beautiful poem. I have an uncoutible number of ...

This is really good. I like poems that are very honest, like this one. It's not exactly dripping with emotion but there is still alot of it. It could just ...

Wow. I love storys like this and you're very good at it. There were afew small things, but they were all mentiond by the above comments so I won't bore ...

mystirious,i like it. I relly like the wording. It makes you wonder what's wrong or what happend. i agree that there could be a little more to it but there ...

that's really sweet. I can tell this was written in a moment of love at first site.

awwwI really liked that. It was full of honesty and sincireity for your love of someone. they're lucky to have this written about them.

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I like this chapter because it shows us how creepy Will is. Which is Really creepy. I hope that at some point you explain why she still has feelings for ...

I like this chapter because it shows what kind of relationship Becca and Vick have. And it hints at something more to come.

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I Really love what you have so far. I can't wait to read the real thing. I love stories that have dark, errie subjects and I can tell that this ...

That was really good and very deep. I love the emotion coming out of that pice. i really want to know the rest of the story now. It really leaves ...

I think I know exactly what is going on in this story. I feel like that sometimes. Sometimes I don't know if I'll make it through to another day, but ...

that was cute and kind of sad. Did this really happen to you? If so I hope your heart has or is healing.

Wow. i really liked that. I don't know what it was that made it beautiful, but it was.