Erica

This is so true, I hope girls will read this to avoid going through it. to amny already have. The next her mom notices there something wrong "The next" is ...

I loved this! It was like reading a story, I couln't wait to find out what happend next. And you're rhyming was extremely well done. Lost himself in grief, he ...

I love the way you started out running through the thoughts in you're head and it was pretty calm, then you suddenly became violent in you're wording and the feeling ...

I love everyone that is left. But my favorites are definatly Allison, Adam, And Chris. Danny was one, but he chooses alot of songs that are simular and it is ...

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I like this. You're ryhming is perfect, but if your going to have commas you should also have periods, and lowe and uppercases in those sentances. Other people keep calling ...

This was very interesting, I love that the main character is deaf, not many people are willing to take such a risk in writting that kind of character. I aplod ...

In the doorway, time stood still. Embraced and lost, it mourns the obvious. You had you chance, but now it is lost. The teeth and the hate, pour out everything ...

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Honestly, i didn't plan on rhyming. I didn't even notice any rhyming until it was pointed out. Completly unintentional.

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I would add more discription, but the structure i used for this poem is hard to add in with. I used an actuall ode structure, not free verse. It was ...

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I just read the entire thing and I loved it. I really hope it gets published, or you post more of the story. I really want to read the rest. ...

I really liked the wording of this pieace. What is it about exactly? I t kind of makes the reader imagine this horrible place. My favorite stanzas are Our brave ...