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It wansn't that it was harsh that I cared, I like harsh.I just want to know if it was really that bad or if that was just that persons opinion.

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Poem Breakdown for those who are confused She had a darkness she couldn't’t control. She took her life and let it go. She was depressed and killed herself Some say ...

YEs I did. It was a parody for an English class assingment.

Hey, I'm glad to be the first to give the first review. I really like what you're saying in this poem, and it's very well written. Just a few things. ...

Personally I hate critiques that are too nice, though I tend to give them alot, how are you supposed to improve if no one tells you what to fix. No ...

I think the edit is better, the flow of it is smoother and it isn't repetive. No nit-picks. It is very nice and has great meaning. well done.

Again I like it as a poem and if you want it to stay a poem I wouldn't change a thing. If it were a song though there are some ...

I like how this starts out all calm and peaceful then all dark and mad. Pretty cool. In my opinion it's kind of odd comparing things to food in this ...

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I reall y liked this poem and with some more verses i can see it as a song. My only nit-pick is that there are some lines that shouln't be ...

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I love this poem because it is so relateable. Or atleast it is to me. Poems dealing with emotions are usually the strongest in my opinion, this one does a ...

I like where it is going, but it could use a little more imagry in my opinion. This place sounds interesting and I would like to be able to picture ...