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I liked it a lot, noticed that there has been many edits to it considering previous reviews.. id criticize the same things to be honest. Its great now, only thing ...

good to meet you :) but be warned, mcdonalds will have your head for your username :)

Everlong Countless days, I awake, hoping for the moment where finally see the long awaited smile of my dear friend. Be it the sting of the sun in my eyes, ...

i really enjoyed it! if you dont mind me asking, what was your exact meaning of the word vertigo? Why did you make it the title? What was its significant ...

For those lost souls, Death is hardest on the forgotten . I would use a period here instead of a comma For those lost souls, Time of pain, and floods ...

Hiya, my names Tyler. My writing style i don't consider very... ordinary. I have posted one of my pieces, I will see how it is judged and consider posting more ...

Where could I possibly begin? A faint struggle of... shall we say, understanding? You could, but you yourself would be... misunderstood. I see you there, agile critter. Your beady eyes ...

Short and sweet, it tends to have a "thrown together" feel to it, but i enjoyed it personally. No reason to criticize this piece, on my part.

Your choice of words was very clear, it spoke to me.