Erb

I certainly liked your style, it was different from what I'm used to reading. Some of the lines confuse me however. Are you going through the seasons? Because I was ...

Hi its IR. Its a pleasure to review your poem. I hope you find it helpful. Ok. the first thing i saw was the old language. I really made it ...

This is my first attempt at poetry. I am open to heavy criticism here because I know i need to improve. Thanks! Green to white O summer, where art thou? ...

Very nice! But some of your choices of wording I'm questionable about. "you can’t feel" i was hoping for a better word besides "feel" actually. Also the parts where you ...

Yikes,kind of a sick one if you ask me. I have but one question: Have you ever been had a "Lesson in Dying"? It was well written though, looking forward ...

One word, WOW. That was incredible! I don't think there's a single part of that i didn't enjoy. The title was but mediocre though. It fits with your story, but ...

I really liked your plot shifts, from the red wine and gripping your bedpost right back to the office chair. Kind if gives the reader a sense of whats inside ...

The first of this poem had me smiling! Very good work! I found towards the ending you kind of dragged it on a lot more,(your single lines) but besides that ...

This piece was very descriptive, which is great! But at the end, i kind of had a feeling of "What.. that's it!?". Also, you might want to try to find ...

Ahh.. have you ever heard of the term "comma splicing"? Try to avoid the overuse of commas my friend. I also found myself... bored with this piece. Most of what ...

I really liked the title of this, definitely caught my attention! But you should make your poetry a little more... mysterious. and toward the drier road (on the sign was ...

I'm very sure this poem contains a lot of true passion and feeling for your fictional fantasy but I just cannot bear to read another Twilight fanfic or any type ...

This was really interesting. I definetly didn't stray away and think about other things while reading this. I didn't notice any grammatical errors really, maybe one or two. I loved ...

The Wall Ah, the very essence of life. But what is life...? When it is lived in such vein. There sometimes seems to be absolutely no purpose. A soul which ...

Thanks for the review. However this was written in the first place for people who were involved in my life. I remembered previous activity on this site and decided to ...