Eraqio

Thank you, an actual reply and critique instead of some unrelated dribble about standards or some other crap. Ma'am, I thank you deeply. The other Ma'am, "This is not Poetry" ...

Give 'em hell kid - My Chemical Romance

most of the story is in his mind. even the opening is a nightmare.

hahah, wow. Imagination can really benefit society, I mean, if my test papers looked like that, I'd pay attention. Now if only the teachers could be that interesting.....maybe we can ...

Great use of language. I liked the use of some dialect in the character's speech as well as their thoughts. It was well written to say the least of it. ...

I guess heavy reading is a bit much for most people. I dont write that well, I know, but I'd really like it if people at least told me what ...

Poetry does have its styles. This is one of them. I diddnt put it in the wrong category. Try reading up on the thousands upon thousands of poetry styles that ...

I kept imagining you going through a cluttered city of cardboard boxes. Overall it was pretty well put together, and the last person above me pointed out minor to extreme ...

You lost me after about the first passage. I liked alot of the wording but spelling and usage errors just kind of threw me off. I agree with dragnet about ...

I'm a rainstorm on a sunny day, unexpected but pleasent none the less. I calculate while I initiate, contact between polar opposites cause reactions we all can be ashamed of. ...

“Mr. Howard, I don’t know how to say this….” Everything seemed colorless, drenched in a tidal wave of a blackness that he couldn’t describe. The doctor’s face was a wide ...

Wow hah. I liked it. The character and narration kept my attention all the way through, mainly how it felt a little mysterious even in it's explanation. the overall flow ...

I got lost about half way through, but I just re-read and caught on hah. It was good in most of it's angles but I feel like it diddnt use ...