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Re: Roomies! Introduction
the above review kinda stumped me hah. Overall this seems like itd be very interesting, I'm just wondering how the Leoplouridon is going to fit, and yes I probably spelt ...
Feb 6, 2009 -
Re: Skyfall
Its quiet. A soft stillness illuminated by a wafting blue light surrounds me as I lay in a field of flowering dreams. Its beautiful. I'm not alone, in fact there ...
Feb 5, 2009 -
Re: Feelings Don't Last Forever
sounds like the openings to a punk song. Great composition, I think the lines could have been a bit longer and a few more expressive words could have been used, ...
Feb 4, 2009 -
Re: Sunsets
This work was deeply emotional, as if you diddnt already know that hah. Overall the piece had beautiful imagery concerning the details about the pain and suffering of the male ...
Feb 4, 2009 -
Re: A frightful winter morn.
The cold is my only lover. I feel naught for the man next to me. He is soon to death, so why would it matter? Where does my loyalty lay? ...
Feb 4, 2009 -
Re: It is regrettably...
Feel the drum beat, bum bam bum, feel the cannon flash, bum bam bum, feel the emptyness, bum bam bum, left by the damned, bum bam bum. Steel the young ...
Feb 4, 2009 -
Re: There are no more children.
See them, there, in that open expanse. Hear them, there, in their rigid lines. They march with precision, discipline, and a strange maturity found in the steps of elder soldiers. ...
Feb 3, 2009 -
Re: The dagger of passion (Totally reworded)
Its very curt, kind of like something you'd expect in a riddle or a hint towards something. It was very intresting to say the least and I enjoyed it, but ...
Jan 29, 2009 -
Re: The Pyre-Men.
They arent really there. I know that much. They dance above the cemeteries and race the sun. The branches of dead trees reaching out to them, trying to keep them ...
Jan 29, 2009 -
Re: There is no enchantment
The composition was very good. It still needs a bit of work and a bit more visual language but overall very good.
Jan 9, 2009 -
Re: Clad in Embers.
Mistake made. no post
Dec 29, 2008 -
Re: Maybe I Need You
It was extremely personal. also it kinda followed an A to B then back to A to C back to A to D back to A method. at times it ...
Dec 17, 2008 -
Re: The 'Shift' Key
hahaha. This is a public service announcement from The YWS : Please WRITE CORRECTLY!!! then again I make the most capitalization errors of anyone here. so meh.
Dec 17, 2008 -
Re: Only Speak in Song Titles
Calling all Skeletons - Alkaline Trio
Dec 17, 2008 -
Re: Only Speak in Song Titles
Disenchanted : My Chemical Romance
Dec 16, 2008
