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Eraqio

  • Fanfiction Short Stories Re: Roomies! Introduction

    the above review kinda stumped me hah. Overall this seems like itd be very interesting, I'm just wondering how the Leoplouridon is going to fit, and yes I probably spelt ...

    Feb 6, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Skyfall

    Its quiet. A soft stillness illuminated by a wafting blue light surrounds me as I lay in a field of flowering dreams. Its beautiful. I'm not alone, in fact there ...

    Feb 5, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: Feelings Don't Last Forever

    sounds like the openings to a punk song. Great composition, I think the lines could have been a bit longer and a few more expressive words could have been used, ...

    Feb 4, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Sunsets

    This work was deeply emotional, as if you diddnt already know that hah. Overall the piece had beautiful imagery concerning the details about the pain and suffering of the male ...

    Feb 4, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: A frightful winter morn.

    The cold is my only lover. I feel naught for the man next to me. He is soon to death, so why would it matter? Where does my loyalty lay? ...

    Feb 4, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: It is regrettably...

    Feel the drum beat, bum bam bum, feel the cannon flash, bum bam bum, feel the emptyness, bum bam bum, left by the damned, bum bam bum. Steel the young ...

    Feb 4, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: There are no more children.

    See them, there, in that open expanse. Hear them, there, in their rigid lines. They march with precision, discipline, and a strange maturity found in the steps of elder soldiers. ...

    Feb 3, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: The dagger of passion (Totally reworded)

    Its very curt, kind of like something you'd expect in a riddle or a hint towards something. It was very intresting to say the least and I enjoyed it, but ...

    Jan 29, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: The Pyre-Men.

    They arent really there. I know that much. They dance above the cemeteries and race the sun. The branches of dead trees reaching out to them, trying to keep them ...

    Jan 29, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: There is no enchantment

    The composition was very good. It still needs a bit of work and a bit more visual language but overall very good.

    Jan 9, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Clad in Embers.

    Mistake made. no post

    Dec 29, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Maybe I Need You

    It was extremely personal. also it kinda followed an A to B then back to A to C back to A to D back to A method. at times it ...

    Dec 17, 2008
  • Lounge, The Re: The 'Shift' Key

    hahaha. This is a public service announcement from The YWS : Please WRITE CORRECTLY!!! then again I make the most capitalization errors of anyone here. so meh.

    Dec 17, 2008
  • Randomosity Re: Only Speak in Song Titles

    Calling all Skeletons - Alkaline Trio

    Dec 17, 2008
  • Randomosity Re: Only Speak in Song Titles

    Disenchanted : My Chemical Romance

    Dec 16, 2008


Anxiety is the dizziness of freedom.
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