Eraqio

Practicing Catholic here hah. I'm usually content with "There is a God, be good to one another and make sure to help those who need a leg up." This work ...

I liked it. It felt very informal, and in poetry I think thats a virtue in most cases. Most. now aside from that, The pacing of the whole work just ...

Nice hahah. It comes off as kinda slutty but pretty much any affection these days is so who can complain? on to critique, I'd work on your punctuation a bit ...

Just a let down chelsie without a smile to call her own. She never was much for words, and usually a sigh accompanied a stranger's moan. Does it mean much ...

Wow. Thats all, on first impression, that I can say. Now after I've overcome my shock... This was a great piece, honestly, from top to bottom, great vocabulary, metaphors and ...

This struck me as a typical love lost song. Dont get me wrong it definately plucked at the heart's strings its just that it diddnt really go beyond that message ...

This poem struck me more as an old European hymn to courage or virtue or something like that... I liked its overall message and its composition was good but in ...

What does it mean to be in the arms of a Lover? Is it a sense of security, of selfishness redeemed? If its the latter, I must disagree, because none ...

I love the kind of disjointed yet orderly feel the whole piece just gave me from start till finish. Very well done!! I'm a fan of breaking from the norm ...

I liked it. Honestly Towards the end it sort of gave me an old english tale feel, which I think you may have been going for. The piece itself was ...

hahahahaha, nipples. Okay, as a poem, this really diddnt strike me as very worthy of poetry form. it seemed to be more of a short story actually, like a rough ...

One day as a young man walked along a busy city street, he came upon an elderly man dressed in rags and thinner than a rake, yet smiling broader than ...

GAH!!! I am like the biggest length stickler you will ever meet but I just couldnt complain about this one! hahah, it was great, hontestly, like one of the "F*** ...

(If you read this I would appreciate if you read the whole thing and at least leave a small comment, it doesnt really help anything if you skim, decide you ...

I just loved it. I got a sort of 'Alice' Feeling with alot of this, very good considering you have to keep my imagination running to keep me from leaving. ...