Eraqio

Ezekiel never had much for family, just a father drunker than hell half the time. The preacher at the Catholic church, always found a way to make his day worth, ...

hi ^_^ I would appreciate a review of my poem, "Pawnshop Delights" Genre is Lyrical poetry I believe

Very lengthy and in depth concerning thought. The spelling mistakes that were obvious are nothing a quick going over with a fine toothed comb couldn't fix ^_^ as for the ...

The opening maintained a sort of loose grip on the present then as it went further along it slipped into a kind of afterthought. The character seems to make alot ...

My Review remains the same. I still think you could have extended the lines and improved language. And several lines still stumble, try using different phrasings of the words.

Uhmmm, I'm Eraqio, a few of you know me, and a few of you have read my works. I'd really appreciate a review on my two poems: "Burn the Hospital" ...

Hmaria. Sympathia. Allavouhs Naviz Tourquois (Yes spelled that way)

See the set up in the false wares store? What you get there you'll want some more, its a hollow feeling that everyone loves to buy. Dig into your checkbook ...

hahah, I love a good Rant. I'm not really sure what I can say about this. I am a mighty foe of line length, and these short, agonizingly short lines ...

I think this could have used a bit more expansion on language and a few more complex words. There were a few typical lines that fell along the lines of ...

Interesting origin for the work's purpose and direction. Mentioned previously was the simple rhyming nature of the poem itself. For this, with its historic connection and chaotic core, a different ...

(A statement on one of my previous works said that even in my poem's abstract understanding its hard to get a grasp on what I'm saying or alluding to, so ...

This comes off as mainly observational or even a situational poem. Its more of a frame by frame story of someone watching something happen. The patter in it all was ...

I love, LOVE the informal sence that you put forward at the very beginning, awesome. Now onto content. The wording and the phrasing all combined well with the rhyme scheme ...

This piece struck me as a bit banal at the beginning, but as I went along the language and inflection really surprised me. Well done with the conveyance of feeling ...