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Re: We'll Speak easy in the Cardboard Kingdom.
The city thrives on its fuel of broken dreams and illegal booze. The cops roaming the streets are either hopelessly optimistic and morally rigid or irreconcilably corrupt and lacking in ...
Apr 22, 2009 -
Re: Lets sing the body Necropathic.
Don't you care to know, how old Tommy's doing these days? Well last week he was gunned down by his namesake. It was a pretty little murder, with Hollywood trimmings, ...
Apr 20, 2009 -
Re: The Hit and Run Freestyle.
I'm a fuck up but I fuck up with grace, I try my best to seem like I got a plan then hide the shredded life map behind my back. ...
Apr 20, 2009 -
Re: Sylvy's troubles scenes 1-4
I like the concept. Sorry, I'm not much for reviewing right now, just went to a viewing of a dead relative and I'm going to the funeral tomorrow. Anyways, I ...
Apr 13, 2009 -
Re: Vampire Field Classification Guide.
Forward, by Director of the OWDS Bureau, Carson Miles. "Vampire classification is difficult, considering that many different incarnations of Nosferatu are up and running in our collective consciousnes
Apr 13, 2009 -
Re: Remembrance
Very proper language. It diddnt really come off as lyrical to me. As prose, maybe, I dont know I'm no expert. On to content. This was a great work, to ...
Apr 10, 2009 -
Re: Do You Get It?
Hell no ^_^
Apr 9, 2009 -
Re: Chasing the Wind
Great work o.0 I'm stunned, to be honest. The visuals and emotional workings of this poem are very deep and complex, I loved it. The only real problem I have ...
Apr 9, 2009 -
Re: Make Music happy. Give her something to review!
RAWR!!! hey can you review 2 poems?
Apr 9, 2009 -
Re: Stormy Reviews~
Please review? ^_^ We burried the heroes. Lyric Poetry
Apr 9, 2009 -
Re: We burried the Heroes.
we're not superheroes anymore, were not as invincible as we always were. But we'd still like to think ourselves the savior of the hour, imagine me carrying on while the ...
Apr 8, 2009 -
Re: The Neverending Love Song
Very emotional work. This is definitely a star. Some of the stanzas gave me a faint glimmer of classic love, the almost unending desire and passion for one person that ...
Apr 8, 2009 -
Re: A San Fransiscan Fire Rag.
The city's burning, the city's burning, we're all still dancers without a hall. The world keeps calling, the world keeps calling, but we're too damn loud to notice our own ...
Apr 3, 2009 -
Re: Pox Party
It comes off as kinda cutsey wootsey for more than a quarter of it then kind of loses me in abject randomness. It has a focus, dont get me wrong, ...
Apr 3, 2009 -
Re: Removed
Great work. The questioning air mixed with the general waiting feel throughout the work definitely made it an interesting read. The topic is really specific hah, I wonder why that ...
Apr 1, 2009
