Eraqio

love the chaos!! chaos chaos and more chaos!! its like if rome was burning and the people in the streets started singing a requiem and then adding on some rocky ...

Why, Miscellania, why does it matter anymore what you think of me? Opinions are all I had, to help me assume that I was worth it all along. Sing me ...

This seems more to me like a monologue....thats just me. Very deep in language and imagery, I could see the subject struggling in the mental corner they felt they were ...

*stumbles over first few stanzas. I liked it. It was over enough that I immediately got a slight picture of what you were 'implying' but it remained lucid enough that ...

The Title wasnt very interesting, you should know that. Oddly enough I think it was its banal nature that attracted me in the first place. anyways, other than a few ...

She made me wake up. I'm tired of all the nightmares. I'm tripping on a star that had burned so bright, that everyone had to drown her. An ocean comes ...

Pretty. To say the least. It dragged on, towards the end, just a tad. But it was forgivable as this had so much to say for itself. The connection the ...

Touching. Really, all sarcasm that I COULD unload on you aside, very, very touching. The opening comes off as childishly shy, almost a kind of guilty explanation for the topic, ...

Valleys all choked up with dust. No reason to wake up, tomorrow. The storm's coming in tonight, button up your homes and dream with your boots on. The flowers got ...

It seems insightful, but it still holds a disgusted distance between the reader, the subject and even the faceless character being spoken of. Very appealing, I'm glad you shot for ...

Pretty. Honestly, very Pretty. Very few pieces are pretty, a kind of awkward sweetness that pulls at something, emotions, anything, but none the less this was a nice peice. I ...

I found some typical rhyme schemes throughout and I got the usual melancholy feeling associated with a love lost. It was good, in topic and overall composition, but I think ...

Wow! Definately a star! This had an energy that was almost chaotic yet very structured. The descriptive language and suggestion to the reader and or poem's intended target was very ...

This poem seems like more of a short moment description, not a poem so much. Odd to come from me but I still diddnt get much connectivity beyond the progression ...

Your character is your own, unless as I stated you decide to use one of the already existing characters. You can present them however you wish, either through the basic ...