Eraqio

There is no bittersweetness to this. Its a sort of semi-serious taunt as far as I can see and its pretty well done. Your touting what you would do, or ...

They found her face down in the water, peaceful as can be, but none the less, I found a dress as black as black should be. Never-mind the sullen voices, ...

It went on for a while and towards the middle seemed to drone a bit. It surprised me, it continually re-engaged my interest throughout, with creative images and word usage ...

You seem mainly to be writing about sensation, the look and feel of different things. Story wise...there is none, beyond an in the moment theme your using to keep the ...

The title was very ... pedestrian. I really only entered because, well, it diddnt have many reviews. The content...diddnt really keep me. The questioning nature tried to draw on some ...

I like the flow of it, kept me from having to double back in order to get a clear picture of how it's supposed to sound. the story within the ...

I'm not good at putting things in my perspective. Hell even if I put something in First Person its always through someone else, no hint of me beyond my writing. ...

Thanks for the considerable attention you paid to my singular intro. The work itself is a third person narrative and is told through...well a lot of people actually. I think ...

The night shared its fleeting dominion with a chilled, moist air that left no house free of its piercing presence. The sky glowed from distant storms and parting clouds catching ...

My reviews are very short and more on content than punctuation. Certain parts of this were very descriptive, congratulations from a Lovecraft fan here on that, however your description can ...

(this and the lines afterwards are the actual intro to a novel I'm writing.) I'm from the farming community of Brawley, California, a growing town in the Imperial Valley just ...

hahaha, awesome junebug it was very....simplistically complex. Though the peice was very...very short it still put forth some very thoughtful feel. I loved it. Great Vocabulary in such a small ...

Andre, Andre always smiles. He covers something with those smiles. He laughs, he jokes, he exaggerates, makes us all laugh at his awkward state. We think he knows what it ...

I never go over punctuation and my reviews are short so forgive the curtness of this. For one, I saw rhyme in there, but very awkwardly pieced together rhyme that ...

Very dainty yet solid in construction. The flow was easily coprehended and it helped with the easy going almost dreamy feel throughout. I Enjoyed it, I always love things having ...