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Re: Down the road.
The dream was the same as it always was lately. Three days without a shower and even in his sleep he could smell feet and feverish sweat, but still the ...
Oct 18, 2011 -
Re: Red Crisp Sheets
Ah ho ho ho. well now. This, to me, is a bit of a, excuse me, bitchy format. Not that you are trying to be a bitch, but it's all ...
May 5, 2011 -
Re: I called you lover, you called me forever.
From the lips of people we say we love, there are words of eternity, of certainty, anxiety. Your warmth with mine, fingers intertwined, eyes flashing a look of crushing depth, ...
Feb 21, 2011 -
Re: Been Gone.
Thanks for the input. I wrote this when I finished Basic training, something to get the writing juices flowing again. yeah, I tried a little too hard. Ah well, no ...
Dec 28, 2010 -
Re: Been Gone.
Been gone , yeah I’ve been gone. Been gone long enough to forget the words to our favorite song. I still know the tune. Damn it’s a catchy tune. But, ...
Dec 28, 2010 -
Re: Sounds Sweet
Someday I might look up without fear of falling, down isnt a direction, just a way of life. I’ve been so long without a love song, that now it’s all ...
Dec 28, 2010 -
Re: Stammering while Endeavoring.
Alex, tell me what makes you sad. I make you sad, the sunset, the shift in winds. This world was built to cause sorrow, who knew it was so focused. ...
Dec 28, 2010 -
Re: Affection my Affliction
I have alot of bad habits. One is actually in the title for this little entry. It reads like the title to a Silverstein song. Silverstein is an awesome band ...
Aug 2, 2010 -
Re: We're California's broken heart.
Dont sweat it man, dont sweat it, Lay out on the pavement and feel your skin sizzle. We're too tired to think of prettier words, we're too tired to try ...
Jul 27, 2010 -
Re: Comedy.
I dont really know how to comment on this. Like honestly, it struck me in such a way that it was kind of beyond my analysis. someone with a higher ...
Jul 10, 2010 -
Re: The People of Heaven
I take issue with a couple things but screw it they're not important. Anyways, this was very... well, good. It all read smoothly enough without being cumbersome in it's message ...
Jul 10, 2010 -
Re: Romanticizing a Climax.
Waiting. You breathe too hard and it feels like you swallowed ice. Everything around you seems colder, And everything that touches you scorches it's path on your skin. Shake and ...
Jul 10, 2010 -
Re: Innocence is a Daisybed
All very sad. And a bit of uncaring musing. Hmm, sad feeling, it was good. Really the imagery and the word usage had me going back and reading it acoupld ...
Jul 10, 2010 -
Re: A little sun dont hurt nobody...
What kind of summer, is here this year? No one, no one, yes no one, is ever laughing. The pools are boiling, clouds of chlorene peeling off all your makeup. ...
May 27, 2010 -
Re: Six Feet Under The Stars (Revised) Chapter 1
Fabulouso!!! not really. anyways, this played out like an episode of ... well anything aimed at teenage girls. Sonya is a bitch, btw. Even after the intitial, oh I hate ...
May 27, 2010
