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Re: Today, we dance.
My writing class had to observe our surroundings for 30 minutes and then write a poem about what we found. This is my first stab at poetry so please, feel ...
Feb 2, 2011 -
Re: A Brief Zombie movie
Hello! First of all, I like what I've seen so far, but I was very distracted by your grammar mistakes... They really took away from the plot and the script ...
Feb 2, 2011 -
Re: I just well I needed somewhere to put what I'm writing
Well hello there AdDan! :) It's very much okay that most of your work is dark and not comical; that was my biggest worry when I came onto this site. ...
Feb 2, 2011 -
Re: Heroes Never Die, They Just Get Lost Sometimes
A little girl sat alone on the swing, her mom too busy to push her. So instead she swayed lightly comma her feet just grazing the ground. As she swayed ...
Jan 29, 2011 -
Re: I'm new. What else is?
Hey! My name is Taylor and I'm here to welcome yah. If you need any help AT ALL about YWS or really anything, or if you just want to chat, ...
Jan 16, 2011 -
Re: I'm new. Imagine that.
Hey! My name is Taylor and I'm here to welcome yah. If you need any help AT ALL about YWS or really anything, or if you just want to chat, ...
Jan 16, 2011 -
Re: Good evening!
Hey! My name is Taylor and I'm here to welcome yah. If you need any help AT ALL about YWS or really anything, or if you just want to chat, ...
Jan 16, 2011 -
Re: Drawing The 'OK' Hand Gesture
LilySoulMahon and Persephoneia have pretty much said it all, with the shading and such. Being ridiculously horrid at drawing myself, I do think you have talent, and if you follow ...
Jan 8, 2011 -
Re: Trouble on the Homefront - Chapter One
rapscallion Oh, I just love this word. Bravo! looked all around, frantically You could either just take out the 'all' and leave the 'around', or say 'the man frantically looked ...
Jan 8, 2011 -
Re: Oooh me! Pick me!
Thanks! :)
Jan 7, 2011 -
Re: I think you should let me review your work. :)
Hey! Thanks for the review! Can I request one more? Thanks!!! :) Taylor
Jan 7, 2011 -
Re: I Need to Review you! Puh-lease? O_o (OPEN)
Thanks!!!! (PS- this story is told completely through my main character Anna's view. I'm also trying to work in flashbacks to add more detail... they're a little rough.) Thanks again! ...
Jan 7, 2011 -
Re: Bring it on! (Open)
Thanks! (PS- this is a story done completely in my main character Anna's POV. I'm also trying to wor out some flashbacks into the story.) Thanks again! Taylor
Jan 7, 2011 -
Re: RAWR!...Ahem. Would You Like A Review? (CLOSED)
(No matter what you think in the beginning, this is NOT a romance novel! Also, this story is a complete POV of my main character Anna, and she has flashbacks ...
Jan 7, 2011 -
Re: Born to be a .... reviewer ;) *CLOSED*
Thank you thank you thank you!! (Just a note- this is a POV completely from the main character's point. She does have 'flashbacks' throughout the story [which I'm trying to ...
Jan 7, 2011