ErBear

Heh. Heh. Yah. Sorry if this story epically fails, I'm just pulling out of a devistating two week writer's block. (That's not an excuse) As for the changes, I will ...

It started out like any other normal day. Erin, a young girl, was walking home from her middle school in Mattoon, a small town in Illinois. It was late fall, ...

Hey Leth! It's Bubbles- just wanted to say thanks again for the story! I love dying by lollipop!! Wow, you're actually going to write 101 Ways to Die, 101 times! ...

What kid wouldn’t hate going on vacation to Barbie Googolplex with your vicious brother, farty grandma, and moldy dog? Well, that’s what happened to me, on vacation last summer. Here ...

[quote][I call for wisdom To help me get out. Rain down from the Son And help this seed sprout./quote] Wow. Wow. Wow. This is truly inspirational. I love this!! It ...

Hey foxfire!!!! First of all, thanks for posting on my blog!! What character in which one of your stories do I remind you of? Can you please tell me which ...

Yellowsh everyone!! I'm ilovebubbles123. Or you can call me Taylor. (Tay is also allowed) :D I love to sing and dance and laugh. Frolicking through flowers is interesting, and i ...

Ooh!! Capturing!! It really attracts attention because it is an interesting subject. You use the literary tool of suspense very well in this scene. The reader or critiquer is drawn ...

OH TOTES I WOULD LOVE TO DIE IN YOUR STORY!! :thud: I would like to die by choking on a cherry-flavored lollipop. Or have my riding lawnmower flip over on ...

I like it!! It really striked a nerve for me. It shows a little bit of integrity in the male. You wrote him to be proud of what he has, ...

Woooaaahhh!! Beasty story!! You have amazing word choice! I especially loved your opening sentances- "I strode through the orange grass listening to the familiar sounds of my home planet. Galifrey ...

Wow. This is just AMAZING !!! I love it! You have a real talent for writing music!!! Not to mention an amazing knack for word choice!! :D I award you ...

I like your characters!! They are definately unique, with lots of details!! I can't wait for your story!!

Ooh, I love it!!! First of all, the title is exquisite. It really hooks the reader before they have even opened the link!! Secondly, you used awesome word choice and ...

This is truly a wonderful story! I loved the beginning, where you described your characters feelings around Christmas time. Beautiful word choice, and exquisite sentance fluiency!! Bravo! Brava!