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It was still raining lightly when we got to lunch. “Come on ! I want to introduce you to some people.” Katelyn dragged me across the room towards a table ...

Gracie, I think this is beautiful. Thank you.

Hey Erin! So glad you joined! Heyy everyone. This is my best friend Erin. She is amazing. Just thought y'all should know. xD

Hello! Whoah! I started reading this and developed a headache. It's one big block of writing! I would try to seperate paragraphs or even the dialogue; just so it's a ...

Yes, hello! I love your title. It draws me in and really makes me want to read your piece. Exquisite word choice. But where is your story? It says that ...

C laire turned to face the ebony gates of her school . O n the other side there was V iolet , who meant trouble . Not good. *** I ...

He said I collapsed as soon as the plunger was pushed in. He told me of the horrifying car ride that I spent shut up in the back seat of ...

I came to review your piece and saw that everything I was going to say was already said by the other reviewers. Overall I like your piece. Make sure to ...

Hi! Welcome! I'm sooooo excited that you joined! Do you have any questions? Concerns? If you do, FEEL FREE to PM me or write on my wall. You can do ...

This is wonderful. It sums up love... perfectly. I don't really have much else to say. I know you may want grammar/spelling critiques, but there aren't really any that catch ...

I like it. It's cute and carefree and (: A few things to think about: I understand that this is a contest story, and I inferred that you have to ...

Beautiful. These are beautiful. I was stunned when I scrolled down... so amazing. I'm wishing I had your camera (: I've read a few of the comments, and some of ...

Ahhh! I love this! Although I've never been pregnant (because I'm 14), I can relate to this story. It sums up everything that I've learned about having kids, but in ...

I witness a dark hole amass itself I like your word choice here, very strong start right before my deepening eyes-- the animosity of it's existence its, not it's is ...

It means a phobia of long words! How do you spell supercalifragilisticexpealidocious? ...oh wait.