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It increases readability if you spread out the sentances as shown below Who am I ? Take out space between I and ? And who are you? Do you know ...

Good luck!! Your drawing skills are very, very impressive :) You will win this contest!! Taylor

I ran my finger along the rough fabric spines of the books in my library. 'ran' doesn't sound right. Try 'run' My library. I smiled as I thought of those ...

Hullo! Welcome to YWS! Usually it's a lot busier than this, but everyone is gone around 'these holidays' :) PM me if you have any questions or concerns about the ...

Having no artistic talent of my own, I like to review. First order of business- you would probubly get more reviews if you put your art pieces in a different ...

Anna Trueman sat awkwardly beside me outside Room 239, quietly sobbing as we sit in silence. I glanced at her, feeling her pain and confusion, and try to remember what ...

Feet meet feet where hearts met pavement. this phrase means so much.. it's beautiful Tears meet cheeks where lips kissed softly. awwh. this is beautiful and really captures the despair ...

Her dreams, however helpful, seemed to be tormenting her, as well as the thought that was spreading, like black ink onto a page, into her mind her barely conscious mind: ...

Hey! Love this chapter! :) Make uuber sure to check your commas. Looking through, I noticed a lot of comma errors. Also, you capitalize the beginning of dialougue, in your ...

Ahaha! This was a great story! :) Taylor

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Hey there Lane! Welcome! WOW- you're 100! Congrats on that! :p Simple is the best way to go, in my opinion :) If you have any questions, need a story ...

Oh, please! Everyone starts out as a noob... being a noobie is one of the coolest things about being on this site! Everyone's here to support you, your writing, and ...

My mind is reeling so fast right now with confusion and doubt, the only thought I manage to formulate is, “Why?” Memories worm their way back in also. I think ...

“Row row your boat roughly down the stream…merrily merrily life’s but a living hell,” I sang quietly while squeezing the sponge letting the water run down my leg. I sighed ...