ErBear

THIS IS AMAZING. I looked at it and thought it was a photograph. Critique from the head down: Head & hair- looks very real. The shapes are lifelike. The nose ...

The Voyage of the Pied Piper Ch. 2 I watched as the bodies of my comrades were dumped overboard and the blood was mopped up in minutes. The insane captain ...

Question- What is this for? While I LOVE vampires and am very interested in the werewolf side, what is this for? Is it just a note to the general public? ...

Hello Sak! I like this. Everyone can relate to the experience of the teased-up pretty-and-perfect mean girl who's actually a person inside. The hardest thing is to see a friend ...

The world is zombified Yeah all their brains are fried I would change this to another word. 'Yeah' is bland for such a dramatic poem. I know you’re mortified but ...

YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW MUCH I LOVE THIS. Fantastic. Literally fantastic . I really have nothing to change, other than the fact that it's Tybalt, not Tibalt. That might ...

Gracie, it's wonderful. There isn't a thing I would change. School's almost over, and I got my internet to work, so we can talk. Thanks to your vball friends and ...

I had a dream last night about a guy who was walking along the river when he got pulled in and was forced to live in the river. He could ...

Roger awoke to the sound of horns outside. There was a voice shouting in Arabic which, after speaking, was followed by a tremendous roar of men and stomping of feet. ...

[If you're not up to date with the story, this chapter is pretty much self explanitory. All you need to know is that Henri is my young cousin who I ...

At that moment, I actually realized how long I'd been out. What seemed like an hour or two , was four months and three days . I n fact , ...

Hey! I agree.. yours is cuter. The thing I love about this isn't the head or the pants (although those are brilliantly shaded) or the book; it's the CUTE LITTLE ...

Another Sunday, the same routine , the same lies. This is what started my every week: waking up to an alarm, getting ready for church, and arriving there. It's too ...

"Melissa, how many times d o I need to tell you to wear your uniform!" T he teacher, Mrs. Ryan, demanded. "Go back home and put on your uniform. Now!" ...

Hey! I LOVED the first one. The graphics are clear and really pop out of the picture. Taking that picture in black and white was what made it special. The ...