Epicdonkalous

I really liked this, but like the previous comments, I believe you should have elaborate on "The Change". Overall, I thought that it was nice, since you didn't start off ...

Hola, Caitlin! I'm a fresh diaper on the bottom of this wackadoodle baby too. xD You sound like one of those shy-hyper girls. xD Yay smilies! :D :)

Ah, I love this site already. x3

I loved that. It wa perfect, it was just so.....epic. I want to read more, yet I don't, like the ending was...well, perfect. There was a few grammatical errors, but ...

Hmm. I think this poem has potential to be fantastic, considering its topic, but the way it was written didn't do it for me. I liked the subject and the ...

Wow, that is a really nice poem! I liked the majestic, yet oddly mysterious vibe it gave me. I adored your use of adjectives, I could literally picture "A rosy, ...

I like this poem, it was quite disturbing, haunting, even. After I read your little spoiler about how some of it was forced, I agreed immensely. Some parts felt like ...

Salutations all! As you can see, my username is Epicdonkalou s, and if we become friends, I might tell you my name. o< This is my first day here, and ...