EnchantressMuffin

Read and you'll see in your mind The image of a quiet cheerful girl Who suddenly died This is a really good poem. It flows well, and has a nice ...

I try to critique when I have something to say that would be helpful to the author. If all I have to say is, "this is a good story, and ...

Well, this was a little... interesting. The writing was all right, though sometimes I felt like it was jumping around a little without enough description. You might want to change ...

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This is a really badical poem. I can completely relate to the kid... perhaps because I'm only fourteen... or perhaps because I am really similar. I, also, have not grown ...

That's a really interesting poem. The imagery is excellent, and I like the feeling, though the undercurrent is slightly dark... It makes me wonder what inspired it...

Hi, I'm EnchantressMuffin, and I'm new here. Um... I write a lot, and I try to be serious about it but school and just plain procrastination gets in the way ...