EnchantressMuffin

Hello and welcome to YWS! Hee... your bit of advice is funny.... Usually it's something about a blank page, and not a blank screen. Heh. For some reason I found ...

This was a nice poem... a little bit hard to understand at times, but making your reader think a little is a good thing, yes? :wink: One thing I didn't ...

Ooh, I like this, especially the "onyx coils poised to strike" bit. Good stuff. I think, yeah, you're right, it can stand alone. Muffin

Hey Chris! I'm Muffin, and I like poetry too! I'd love to see some of your poems, when they get up on the boards! :D Cheerio! Muffin

This was a good poem. I especially liked this: Living on the hills But ruling silently. Watching his kingdom Survive beneath his hooves. Very nice bit here. I don't know ...

Somehow I remember reading this sometime last month... But wasn't there more of it? I can't remember. Maybe that was another of your poems... I don't know. Anyway, it was ...

Erm... Wow. Intense. Intense, but gorgeous. I think I understand it, and it scares me... But I like it anyway. Your imagery is excellent, and I think the way you ...

This is an excellent, very very intense poem. Kudos to you. I'm sorry, but I can't think of much else to say but that. Muffin

This poem is pretty good, but it does seem a bit long-winded, and I couldn't really see what you were trying to say even as I found out. It took ...

Hey! I'm Muffin. *bows to the hyper coconut* I love your name! I can't think of anything else to say, but.... hi!!! I'm also a little bit crazy right now. ...

Hello, hi, howdy, bonjour, salutations, aloha, all that. :D Welcome to YWS!! I am Muffin, and I work part-time as a PM assistant. I like your avatar. Pink rocks! I ...

I really like this poem. It's powerful, and the imagery is fantastic. I don't know about anybody else, but the relative simplicity of your words really give me a stunning ...

This is a pretty good poem. Something about the timing (or maybe it's called the rhythm) is a little off. I think it's because you have the ends of sentences ...

Hey! I'm EnchantressMuffin, but everybody here calls me Muffin or Em. You can call me whichever you like. I don't care. Welcome to YWS! I hope you like it here. ...

Hey! Welcome to YWS!! I hope you like it here. Most everybody's really nice, especially to newbies. If you need any help just PM me. I hope to see you ...